Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
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Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
It was your Pilgrimage that brought you back here, back to the mounds. This place has haunted the chaotic shifting fires of your dreamscape for as long as you can remember. You might call it your birthplace, if you were inclined to attach such perverse sentimentality to it. As things are, they remain a place of fear and uncertainty. You only remember parts of it. Terrible, nebulous details of what happened to you broken up by hideous nothing. Perhaps it was the desire to become master of memory's palace that kindled your fascination with the mind and its fragility.
The mounds teem around Bishopsgate Psychiatric Hospital's East Wing, like blunt teeth. One mound makes up the foundation of the building. While they aren't exactly towering, they remain vast conicles of rocks, earth and vegetation, piled by whatever forgotten native tribe called this land their own however many centuries ago. The knowledge that that these mounds go so much deeper than the eye can see is unsettling.
Dusk has fallen over the Hospital Grounds. It's fairly out of the way here. The windows of the East Wing are for the most part, shuttered, as you stand perhaps 200 metres from the mound you clambered out from under. You freeze and cast your mind back to your first moments.
You feel molten agony from inside your torso as you are crushed by a cold, overpowering mass from all directions. Jagged points burrow into your skin as you try to free yourself. You try to cry out, spitting grave earth from your mouth, but you find you cannot speak more than meaningless vowells. You open your eyes to see a dim light winking through tiny gaps between the monolithic stone slabs imprisoning you. You see writing made from smears of a deep red substance daubed onto the slab before you, flecked in yellow fluids.
Terrible Journeys Await You My Child
You feel a kind of mental fortitude gestate within you. It flows from your psyche into your flesh as you calmly, and quite involuntarily, wrench your arm free from a pocket of earth, elbowing rocks from behind you. The light is brightest behind the stone slab in front of you, with the writing on it. You bring your fist against it to the sound of a sharp crack and rocks tumbling on the other side. The slab seems to have moved a couple of inches. It seems that gravity is on your side.
OOC: I thought that we could deal with a repressed memory of a traumatic birth, since mental frailty seems to be a real theme with your character concept. So my idea is to dole out the birth flashback sequences episodically as you progress through Bishopsgate Hospital attempting to understand madness and its part in the human condition or doing whatever it is that you want to do. This is your chronicle after all. However, I would advise avoiding confronting your birthplace in the present timeline until you're finally granted Memory's Shocking Revelation (tm) as part of a repression/avoidance complex. If you want to do something different just say. This is your game and I have no problem tweaking it or changing it up if this isn't what you were looking for.
The mounds teem around Bishopsgate Psychiatric Hospital's East Wing, like blunt teeth. One mound makes up the foundation of the building. While they aren't exactly towering, they remain vast conicles of rocks, earth and vegetation, piled by whatever forgotten native tribe called this land their own however many centuries ago. The knowledge that that these mounds go so much deeper than the eye can see is unsettling.
Dusk has fallen over the Hospital Grounds. It's fairly out of the way here. The windows of the East Wing are for the most part, shuttered, as you stand perhaps 200 metres from the mound you clambered out from under. You freeze and cast your mind back to your first moments.
Birth
You feel molten agony from inside your torso as you are crushed by a cold, overpowering mass from all directions. Jagged points burrow into your skin as you try to free yourself. You try to cry out, spitting grave earth from your mouth, but you find you cannot speak more than meaningless vowells. You open your eyes to see a dim light winking through tiny gaps between the monolithic stone slabs imprisoning you. You see writing made from smears of a deep red substance daubed onto the slab before you, flecked in yellow fluids.
Terrible Journeys Await You My Child
You feel a kind of mental fortitude gestate within you. It flows from your psyche into your flesh as you calmly, and quite involuntarily, wrench your arm free from a pocket of earth, elbowing rocks from behind you. The light is brightest behind the stone slab in front of you, with the writing on it. You bring your fist against it to the sound of a sharp crack and rocks tumbling on the other side. The slab seems to have moved a couple of inches. It seems that gravity is on your side.
OOC: I thought that we could deal with a repressed memory of a traumatic birth, since mental frailty seems to be a real theme with your character concept. So my idea is to dole out the birth flashback sequences episodically as you progress through Bishopsgate Hospital attempting to understand madness and its part in the human condition or doing whatever it is that you want to do. This is your chronicle after all. However, I would advise avoiding confronting your birthplace in the present timeline until you're finally granted Memory's Shocking Revelation (tm) as part of a repression/avoidance complex. If you want to do something different just say. This is your game and I have no problem tweaking it or changing it up if this isn't what you were looking for.

dean- Posts: 746
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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
Alcibiades pauses at the weak hitch in his breath as he remembers crawling out of the mound and embarking on the Pilgrimage that was so filled with the promised warning written in what he now knew was blood and bile. He takes a few steps toward the mound were he sprung from the earth but, with a huff and frown of self-annoyance, turns away. This isn't why he came to Bishopgate. Now was not the time to indulge in some convuluted sense of beginnings, not when something was pulling him to the hospital that had ever since defined his Pilgrimage and the path he has taken to achieve true life and mortality.
Slowly Al takes his strides toward the front door of Bishopgate. Quickly forgetting the close proximity of his first strain toward the light, Al calculates his plan that has claimed his attention for the past month. Eagerly, too eagerly, he had dreamed of foam flecked mouths and screamed rantings at dawn, and had decided that something in this beautiful place lied answers to why the mind was so fluidic and easily broken. These thoughts compell him to approach the hospital faster in anticipation of what lay within those walls. Finally, in what seems to be in an eternal exertion, Alcibiades straightens his tie and clothes before violantly jerking the handle of the front door.
OOC: No, I am really fond of the idea, and I like how perfectly it fits within my character's concept. I am new to PBP rping so tell me if there is anything I can do to up my game. I can take criticism really well so don't worry about that. I hope this will be an enjoyable story for you as well.
Slowly Al takes his strides toward the front door of Bishopgate. Quickly forgetting the close proximity of his first strain toward the light, Al calculates his plan that has claimed his attention for the past month. Eagerly, too eagerly, he had dreamed of foam flecked mouths and screamed rantings at dawn, and had decided that something in this beautiful place lied answers to why the mind was so fluidic and easily broken. These thoughts compell him to approach the hospital faster in anticipation of what lay within those walls. Finally, in what seems to be in an eternal exertion, Alcibiades straightens his tie and clothes before violantly jerking the handle of the front door.
OOC: No, I am really fond of the idea, and I like how perfectly it fits within my character's concept. I am new to PBP rping so tell me if there is anything I can do to up my game. I can take criticism really well so don't worry about that. I hope this will be an enjoyable story for you as well.
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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
The Hospital grounds are enormous, lying on 24 acres of overgrown farmland. You're surrounded by wide spaces and looming buildings, which lay claim to a diverse array of architectural styles. Stone facades of the 19th century clash against the bland architecture and poured concrete of the late 1960s. It's obvious that the buildings are well maintained, but they somehow remain menacing as they loom over you. The setting sun causes the East Wing to cast a vast, blurry shadow over a memorial fountain. Bishopsgate's exterior is clearly intended to be serene, though the spindling razor wire lining the North, West and East walls detracts from this somewhat. The few visitors and security personell you pass don't even look twice at you. All they see is a man with a briefcase, who could be here for dozens of legitimate reasons. You see no patients.
Modern signage directs you to the reception area in the main medical facility. You also notice directions to the gardens, a gymnasium, a VA ward, and the East and West wings. From the exterior, the main medical facility is an institutional looking, three-storey sprawl. Stepping through, you find yourself in a sterile lobby. It doesn't really smell of anything. It's well-lit and surprisingly quiet. You hear only distant footsteps and telephones, wailing only for two or three rings before being answered. The woman at the reception desk speaks on the phone, relaxed. She looks up at you apologetically as she forwards a call elsewhere. She's fairly young and a little on the heavy side, with a plain sort of face and mousey hair. She hangs up, addressing you with a professional sort of false cheer.
"Can I help you?" she asks, smiling politely. The smile may be a little forced, but you read in it none of the irrational revulsion you're all too familiar with
OOC: I'm kind of new to STing Promethean, so we're in similar boats. A dialogue is handy, so if there's anything about the medium that's baffling, just ask..
Modern signage directs you to the reception area in the main medical facility. You also notice directions to the gardens, a gymnasium, a VA ward, and the East and West wings. From the exterior, the main medical facility is an institutional looking, three-storey sprawl. Stepping through, you find yourself in a sterile lobby. It doesn't really smell of anything. It's well-lit and surprisingly quiet. You hear only distant footsteps and telephones, wailing only for two or three rings before being answered. The woman at the reception desk speaks on the phone, relaxed. She looks up at you apologetically as she forwards a call elsewhere. She's fairly young and a little on the heavy side, with a plain sort of face and mousey hair. She hangs up, addressing you with a professional sort of false cheer.
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"Can I help you?" she asks, smiling politely. The smile may be a little forced, but you read in it none of the irrational revulsion you're all too familiar with
OOC: I'm kind of new to STing Promethean, so we're in similar boats. A dialogue is handy, so if there's anything about the medium that's baffling, just ask..

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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
"Yes, mam. My name is Al Dees and I would like to apply for a job." I say matter of factly and as bruntly as possible without sounding rude. As a last minute thought I add a similiar incincere smile so as to make my official words sound more reasonable.
"Where may I find the documents necessary for such?"
I quickly rumble before taking a quick glance around the place I will hopefully make my abode. A quick shiver runs up my spine as I think of the numerous inmates inside this great place and what I can possibly learn from their fearful yet exhilerating state.
"Where may I find the documents necessary for such?"
I quickly rumble before taking a quick glance around the place I will hopefully make my abode. A quick shiver runs up my spine as I think of the numerous inmates inside this great place and what I can possibly learn from their fearful yet exhilerating state.
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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
"Well... I think the board of directors are in charge of hiring specialists, I could tell you who to contact..." the receptionist begins, "...unless it's the custodial position you're applying for."
She looks a little doubtful. It's possible that you look a little overqualified for a janitor's position. She continues regardless, opening a desk drawer near her feet. She tentatively bends to retrieve something. She seems to over-reach, straining something. She laughs awkwardly under laboured breath.
She looks a little doubtful. It's possible that you look a little overqualified for a janitor's position. She continues regardless, opening a desk drawer near her feet. She tentatively bends to retrieve something. She seems to over-reach, straining something. She laughs awkwardly under laboured breath.

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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
I realise how I look and give out a bark of a laugh. "I have always heard it is customary to wear one's best clothes when applying for a job, but I do want to apply for a custodial position."
I straighten my tie as if to emphasize what I am saying. I am starting to be somewhat uneasy like I had made a poor move and my first impulse is to loom over the poor girl and ask her where I can find the patients. I remind myself that tact is more important right now than impatience as I wait for the woman to get the paper and hand it to me before glancing down at it as my first step toward infiltrating the madhouse.
I straighten my tie as if to emphasize what I am saying. I am starting to be somewhat uneasy like I had made a poor move and my first impulse is to loom over the poor girl and ask her where I can find the patients. I remind myself that tact is more important right now than impatience as I wait for the woman to get the paper and hand it to me before glancing down at it as my first step toward infiltrating the madhouse.
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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
"Well good luck to you." She exhales, finding her balance before rummaging through the drawer. Eventually she emerges, placing two sheets of green paper bearing Bishopsgate's bland, modernized emblem. The information it asks for is fairly scant. Oddly, you see no mention of criminal background checks. You could barely fit 'Highschool Diploma' into the box provided to list formal qualifications. The receptionist looks down and nods, providing a ballpoint pen.
"You can fill that out right here, if you want. I'll get it to the head groundskeeper. If you've got a copy of your resume, that'd help with your application."
The receptionist pauses, as if unsure of how to broach a difficult topic. She laughs awkwardly once. She seems tired.
"You're not, like, writing a novel or anything like that, are you? I mean, this isn't research, is it?"
She stops herself, embarassed, as though realising she'd overstepped a social boundary.
"You can fill that out right here, if you want. I'll get it to the head groundskeeper. If you've got a copy of your resume, that'd help with your application."
The receptionist pauses, as if unsure of how to broach a difficult topic. She laughs awkwardly once. She seems tired.
"You're not, like, writing a novel or anything like that, are you? I mean, this isn't research, is it?"
She stops herself, embarassed, as though realising she'd overstepped a social boundary.

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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
I sense the awkwardness and use that to deal with my own frustration of having to turn in a completely false resume.
I would have thought that being a janitor was at least a job, mam, and I shouldn't be ridiculed for applying. No I am not a writer of any sort, nor am I a scientist, I am merely a janitor who enjoys wearing nice clothes and using correct grammar. As soon as the words leave my mouth I realise they sound wrong but I can't pinpoint how as I fill the rest of the application. At the last moment I decide I don't want to alienate the woman who will be turning in my application.
I give her a weak but more sincere smile. "It's been a long day. My kid's sick. " I add in a bland way as if add some empathy between the woman and myself so she might put in a good word for me as I hand in the application along with my wrinkled resume.
I would have thought that being a janitor was at least a job, mam, and I shouldn't be ridiculed for applying. No I am not a writer of any sort, nor am I a scientist, I am merely a janitor who enjoys wearing nice clothes and using correct grammar. As soon as the words leave my mouth I realise they sound wrong but I can't pinpoint how as I fill the rest of the application. At the last moment I decide I don't want to alienate the woman who will be turning in my application.
I give her a weak but more sincere smile. "It's been a long day. My kid's sick. " I add in a bland way as if add some empathy between the woman and myself so she might put in a good word for me as I hand in the application along with my wrinkled resume.
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Re: Born of Earth, Beneath Minds like Glass
"I'm real sorry to hear that." the receptionist offers, underwhelmingly, looking somewhat unsettled by your answer. She smiles the same painted-on smile as she puts your application to one side.
"If I can get this to Gene tonight... Gene's the head groundskeeper... could you interview tomorrow? I know he's been meaning to get an extra guy for the gardens for a while now."
OOC: Hey, sorry for the delay in both Promethean and Vampire. If you want, then we can fast forward to the interview tomorrow. PbP can move at a glacial pace, so it's a good idea to be conscious of what can be skipped/condensed etc. If you want, you can just provide a brief summary for how Al spends the night, possibly making, say, a research roll into Bishopsgates history if he visits a county archive or something. Up to you.
"If I can get this to Gene tonight... Gene's the head groundskeeper... could you interview tomorrow? I know he's been meaning to get an extra guy for the gardens for a while now."
OOC: Hey, sorry for the delay in both Promethean and Vampire. If you want, then we can fast forward to the interview tomorrow. PbP can move at a glacial pace, so it's a good idea to be conscious of what can be skipped/condensed etc. If you want, you can just provide a brief summary for how Al spends the night, possibly making, say, a research roll into Bishopsgates history if he visits a county archive or something. Up to you.

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