Check THIS Out! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/-t1.htm Noteworthy scenes you'd like to share. Wed, 09 Sep 2009 05:01:03 GMT 10 Check THIS Out! http://i89.servimg.com/u/f89/13/79/50/32/forum_11.jpg http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/-t1.htm Kudos from Sheer! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/kudos-from-sheer-t71.htm Sheer So, there are several posts/threads/characters that I wanted to point out as being really awesome for a variety of reasons, and rather than flood the forum all at once, I figured I'd just collect them all here. I've enjoyed everyone's posts so far, of course, but these ones had specific things that I liked about them. In no particular order... The arrival of Corey. He seems like a really outgoing, fun, flamboyant guy and I loved the title of this post. I was surprised to read in his character ... Check THIS Out! Sun, 24 May 2009 04:33:56 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/kudos-from-sheer-t71.htm#192 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/kudos-from-sheer-t71.htm The Meat Locker... http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-meat-locker-t276.htm Vagas Lupus When I wake up and when I get home from work, everyday, The first thing I do is check this thread. When I am surfing the net, hangin' on Facebook, or numbing my brain on Hulu, I find myself anticipating the next time I can check this thread. MAJOR FUCKING PROPS to DEAN and CHRISTIAEN!!! This is classic "Rip your eyes from your head and smash 'em on the ground" horror, not to mention the fact that I get to interact with these two sociopaths!!!!!! Fucking Brilliant!!!! Check THIS Out! Wed, 09 Sep 2009 05:01:03 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-meat-locker-t276.htm#2179 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-meat-locker-t276.htm The Book Tower http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-book-tower-t237.htm Sheer ]]> Check THIS Out! Mon, 10 Aug 2009 22:00:56 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-book-tower-t237.htm#1773 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-book-tower-t237.htm Sweet Feed! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/sweet-feed-t225.htm christiaen Check THIS Out: One For the Road I started STing this one, but last night the MASTER took it back over, and it sure showed. Sokhar and Dean did a fabulous job of making a simple feed pretty damn thrilling. Check it out if you get a chance. Christiaen Check THIS Out! Fri, 31 Jul 2009 11:57:56 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/sweet-feed-t225.htm#1686 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/sweet-feed-t225.htm Hahahaha! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/hahahaha-t181.htm Arthur (Skab) Wallace Okay, I have to mention... Sheer_Immortal's post What She Came For [Sergio] made me laugh and laugh. First there was: Sergio rolls 4 dice to Scope the Babes But then, it got even better: Sergio rolls 2 dice to Remember Something Too funny. Can't wait to see the rest of this thread. Cheers. Andrew Check THIS Out! Sat, 27 Jun 2009 18:05:07 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/hahahaha-t181.htm#1216 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/hahahaha-t181.htm And the best use of COLOR in a post goes to..... http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/and-the-best-use-of-color-in-a-post-goes-to-t164.htm christiaen And the best use of COLOR in a post goes to..... SHEER!!! Her last conscious thought is, dearlordtheywererightdonotcrosshimRUN. That's just brilliant! I actually went into the code, so I could figure out how you did that!! Very cool! Check THIS Out! Mon, 15 Jun 2009 15:15:48 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/and-the-best-use-of-color-in-a-post-goes-to-t164.htm#880 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/and-the-best-use-of-color-in-a-post-goes-to-t164.htm Damn Cats!! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/damn-cats-t159.htm christiaen Can I just say... I hit the "caterwaul" link while I was reading Skab's very cool Cat Alley feed, and my whippet pup nearly had a coronary!!! She was dead asleep, underneath the blankets, in bed -- mind you -- and jumped up, leaped down and began running around the room, looking under furniture, out all the windows, back and forth, back and forth, trying to find that DAMN CAT!!!!! Not sure what she was going to do with it once she found it (god save us) but she was frantic. At least ... Check THIS Out! Sat, 13 Jun 2009 13:26:23 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/damn-cats-t159.htm#804 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/damn-cats-t159.htm Think Twice -- Nice! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/think-twice-nice-t158.htm christiaen Nice!!! I must admit, I've always had a personal fascination with the murdered Royal Russian family. The story is so intriguing to me, and I always hoped that Anastasia, and perhaps little Alexi somehow escaped. When I saw you created a Kindred character around the Anastasia concept, whether it's just a figment of her imagination or.... well, I was thrilled. What a fantastic idea! This was a nice idea for a feed. I was especially impressed with your worker guys internal dialogue. About ... Check THIS Out! Sat, 13 Jun 2009 12:37:59 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/think-twice-nice-t158.htm#801 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/think-twice-nice-t158.htm The Beast's Reflection http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-beast-s-reflection-t150.htm christiaen Check out this amazing feeding: The Beast's Reflection Talk about riveting. And powerful. And dramatic. And dangerous. And distrubing. And, well, hot! What a fantastic post, Sokhar! And it was really nice how you let the dice carry Russell back and forth -- gaining and losing at the pursuit. It made it very real and suspenseful. And while the racial implications made me uncomfortable, it was discomfort in a real-life, gritty, believable way. I imagine probably very appropriate for ... Check THIS Out! Tue, 09 Jun 2009 14:09:00 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-beast-s-reflection-t150.htm#745 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-beast-s-reflection-t150.htm A Sunrise with Russell's Name On It????? http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/a-sunrise-with-russell-s-name-on-it-t144.htm christiaen "With no slight intended towards Prince Effie, I would say that I believe she draws at least as much, if not more, power from her position than from her own natural abilities. Her status as prince acts as a multiplier to her own strength. Though powerful in her own right, her Beast and her blood is not incredibly potent. Sheriff Morell himself may well have more raw ability. Were she forced to hold her position at the head of the city on just her own merits, she would inevitably be ... Check THIS Out! Sat, 06 Jun 2009 19:06:30 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/a-sunrise-with-russell-s-name-on-it-t144.htm#700 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/a-sunrise-with-russell-s-name-on-it-t144.htm Editing Notes http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/editing-notes-t142.htm christiaen
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LOL -- I look forward to reading Sheer_Immortal's editing notes almost as much as her posts!!!

Smile Christiaen]]> Check THIS Out! Sat, 06 Jun 2009 13:59:56 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/editing-notes-t142.htm#689 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/editing-notes-t142.htm "The Skabbies" Week Two (5/28-6/04) http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-skabbies-week-two-5-28-6-04-t137.htm Arthur (Skab) Wallace Alright, so another week of the game and I didn't want to let some praises pass by without mentioning them! Thus some "Skabbies" to hand out. The "Best Bit of Writing this Week" Skabbie goes to: The Sacrement by Darkwarden. Wow. Blew me away. Heck of a good feeding story. Good mood, good execution, and a great way to bring out the character background of this guy. I hope you got a heap of vitae for that one! The "That Character Has Balls" Skabbie goes ... Check THIS Out! Fri, 05 Jun 2009 03:07:31 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-skabbies-week-two-5-28-6-04-t137.htm#640 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-skabbies-week-two-5-28-6-04-t137.htm "The Skabbies" - Week One (5/20 - 5/27) http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-skabbies-week-one-5-20-5-27-t95.htm Arthur (Skab) Wallace So I've been nothing but impressed by the posting thus far. Very fun. Good dialogue, characters, and scenes. Thus I wanted to just give a big congrats and kudos to a few of the moments that I personally really enjoyed. And for silliness' sake, I'll call those "awards" the Skabbies. Like Emmys or Tonys or Razzies. But probably with 50% more brooding malice. Heh. Praise from week one: I really enjoyed the Paying the Rent exchange between Demonacle and Dean. Good to see some ... Check THIS Out! Thu, 28 May 2009 04:40:34 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-skabbies-week-one-5-20-5-27-t95.htm#335 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/the-skabbies-week-one-5-20-5-27-t95.htm If we are gonna have Skabbies... http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/if-we-are-gonna-have-skabbies-t100.htm legionreturns I'm gonna have to give Arthur a "Brit" coz I love him to bits! Keep up the great work bud, awesome stuff. I don't think I have read a single post yet where I cant close my eyes and be there, seeing exactly what he is doing and all his mannerisms and expressions. I hope he lives long enough to entertain us for a while! Good work! Oh, I just want to add a quick note about a couple of other people: The feeding from Suzette - simple but wonderful and again I can just ... Check THIS Out! Thu, 28 May 2009 22:18:42 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/if-we-are-gonna-have-skabbies-t100.htm#368 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/if-we-are-gonna-have-skabbies-t100.htm Praise for Ghoul Gathering! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/praise-for-ghoul-gathering-t60.htm Arthur (Skab) Wallace I enjoyed reading Look Out, Red Bull (and of course, the preceeding description of Sergio (Ghoul)). The little details made it really good: Reminder to self to breathe, the shirt being cerulian and egg-yolk yellow, the way the character uses reward and punishment to lure Sergio. Little details go so far in capturing the reader, making it elevate from a description of action. Nice stuff, Sheer_Immortal! Cheers. Check THIS Out! Thu, 21 May 2009 05:35:25 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/praise-for-ghoul-gathering-t60.htm#100 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/praise-for-ghoul-gathering-t60.htm And in THIS corner... Arthur "Skab" Wallace! http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/and-in-this-corner-arthur-skab-wallace-t52.htm christiaen I just read Arthur "Skab" Wallace's first feed post... it was just fabulous. Check it out: Feeding: East Riverfront – Rattlesnake Jakes What an excellent first example too. Dean has been going back and forth on how exactly to shape the feeding parameters. As with so many online games, it's easy to fall into the trap of allowing your Kindred character to become a simple vessel you refill every week or two. But the truth is, they are creatures of prey and it isn't always so easy ... Check THIS Out! Wed, 20 May 2009 11:34:39 GMT http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/and-in-this-corner-arthur-skab-wallace-t52.htm#64 http://motorcityburning.forumotion.net/check-this-out-f19/and-in-this-corner-arthur-skab-wallace-t52.htm